Today my class and I were doing a recount about my YouTube work. This took me some time but I managed to do it . I was working on making sure I used capital letters, punctuation marks and that my sentences make sense. I think I did a good job what do you think?
Kia ora Akindu,
ReplyDeleteIt's great to hear what you have been doing during Lockdown. I think you did a good job with your punctuation. I really like the way you used "time words" like yesterday, later on - this is a great feature of a good recount.
I wonder if you can add more personal voice and opinion in your story next time. How did you feel when you took a few hours to do your Youtube videos?
Keep up the great job.
Looking forward to future blog posts,
Miss Laxa