Thursday, August 26, 2021

Reviewing my youtube work

 Today my class and I were doing a recount about my YouTube work.  This took me some time but I managed to do it . I was working on making sure I used capital letters, punctuation marks and that my sentences make sense. I think I did a good job what do you think?

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Akindu,

    It's great to hear what you have been doing during Lockdown. I think you did a good job with your punctuation. I really like the way you used "time words" like yesterday, later on - this is a great feature of a good recount.

    I wonder if you can add more personal voice and opinion in your story next time. How did you feel when you took a few hours to do your Youtube videos?

    Keep up the great job.

    Looking forward to future blog posts,
    Miss Laxa

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